Comments on: Our First Landing Page Critique HEROcast: Zilliant.com

By: Melissa

Melissa — Fri, 15 Aug 2008 22:10:44 +0000

I enjoyed the podcast; however, I didn’t discover it until more than a month after you posted it. In the interim, the Zilliant landing page had been changed to implement some of your suggestions. I checked the Wayback Machine to see if it had saved the original and it hadn’t. It would have been great if you had saved a screen shot of the original landing page so I could have followed along a little better.

By: Amber

Amber — Mon, 14 Jul 2008 17:49:36 +0000

Lori, thank you for letting us critique your landing page. I hope our comments truly help increase your conversions. Plus, you are a great sport to allow other people hear what needs to be done to your site, because it will surely help others who are in the same predicament. Thanks!

By: Lori P

Lori P — Mon, 14 Jul 2008 16:49:09 +0000

Amber - thanks so much (I think!) for choosing our submission as the first landing page critique. While it was a little painful to hear how much work is still to be done, we embrace the opportunity to improve our online efforts and make it that much better. We sincerely appreciate your time and feedback!

By: Juice

Juice — Sun, 13 Jul 2008 03:24:23 +0000

Great first critique… I enjoyed the show and picked up some good tips.

By: Amber

Amber — Fri, 11 Jul 2008 17:25:06 +0000

Hi Phil. We’re glad you enjoyed following along to the podcast. We really felt giving people a visual while listening along was a great idea and can hopefully help others with the same types of landing page problems. Thanks for reading!

By: Phil EH

Phil EH — Fri, 11 Jul 2008 16:49:49 +0000

Nicely done. It was very helpful to hear your critique while viewing the landing and home pages. I also found myself naviaging through the Zilliant site as your team described things they liked on other pages. Kudos to the PPC Hero / Hanapin Marketing team. I’m looking forward to your next site review.