Case Study: Writing Effective Sales Ads

In my experience with PPC, I’ve always had great performance outcomes from running sales ads. They typically outperformed generic product or DKI ads, but I had never tested different elements within sales ads themselves. When one of my clients was running a Spring sale, I thought it would be the perfect opportunity to dig deeper and find out what makes a great sales ad.

I decided to test two elements, mentioning the specific sale in the headline and including an expiration date in the description. Below are the four different ads I tested.

PPC Sales Ads

Results

I first compared the performance of the generic vs. specific sale headline, whether it included an expiration date or not. A yellow cell represents significantly different data.

PPC Sale Ad Headlines

The ads with the Spring Sale headline received significantly more clicks than the generic Save On headline. However, although the Spring Sale ads had a higher conversion rate, it was not a significant increase from the Save On ads.

Next I compared ads with or without expiration dates, regardless of the headline. Below are the results.

PPC Ad Descriptions

The ads that included an expiration date had a significantly higher conversion rate. They also had a significantly higher impression to conversion rate— .01% vs. .002%.

The next question I had was whether combining these two elements together would create an ad that outperformed all the rest in both clicks and conversions. Below are the results when I compared the specific headline ad with an expiration date to the three other versions.

PPC Ad Performance

When the ad headlines were the same, the conversion rate was significantly better for the ad with the expiration date. The click-through rates, however, were roughly equal. When the ad headlines were different, but each included an expiration date, the specific headline won out in terms of clicks. However, the conversion rates were not significantly different.

The only time a specific ad with an expiration date performed better on each metric was when the competing ad had a generic headline and no expiration date. What this showed me was that for this client, headlines had a significant impact on CTR, but not on conversion rates. In contrast, the expiration date significantly increased conversion rates but had no impact on CTR.

PPC Ads Comparison Chart

I was able to gather extremely useful information from this experiment. Since this client values conversions more than clicks, I always include the expiration date in my description. I’m continuing to test different headlines to see if I can create a winning combination that outperforms all other ads.

If you have any experience with testing different sales ads please post below!

 

About the Author

Bethany Bey

Bethany is a former Account Executive at Hanapin Marketing, a search engine marketing firm focused on generating results through pay-per-click advertising.
  • http://twitter.com/iterateiterate Iterate! Iterate!

    Ah, excellent… I like that little tid-bit.  Thanks for the idea – I’m going to give this a shot on a few clients. It’s something I haven’t tried yet. 

    • http://www.hanapinmarketing.com Bethany Bey

      Good luck! I hope you find the same success.

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  • loebster

    Great article. No wannabe rocket-science. straight-forward a/b testing done right. 

    • http://www.hanapinmarketing.com Bethany Bey

      Thanks for reading. I agree, sometimes we get so caught up in implementing the newest thing Google has released that we forget how much going back to PPC basics can improve account performance. 

  • Saija Mahon

    This is great – thank you! I have tried similar techniques before and ‘sales ending on x’ message seems to work really well. I guess we all love a sale and panic when it’s ending! And go shop. Fast.

    Will continue to test this as well,
    Thanks
    Saija Mahon

    • http://www.hanapinmarketing.com Bethany Bey

      Hi Siaja,

      I was amazed at the impact just putting the expiration date had on ad performance. I’m hoping to uncover another performance enhancer like that soon!

  • http://twitter.com/ksaxoninternet Katie Saxon

    Nice – I love your approach, definitely one I’ll be trying out!

    • http://www.hanapinmarketing.com Bethany Bey

      Thanks Katie! Let me know if you find any other ways to boost sales ad performance.

    • http://www.hanapinmarketing.com Bethany Bey

      Thanks Katie! Let me know if you find any other ways to boost sales ad performance.

  • http://www.esparkinfo.com/ Anand Mistry

    Ad
    will appear with specific discount so it will help us lot. I have very good
    experience on it. It can help us to gain ad score. Who does not like to click
    on specific ad which gives specific details regarding products or services?

  • http://twitter.com/askppc Cleofe Betancourt

    Adding the expiration date in your text ad?  I can honestly admit that I’ve overlooked that…great idea!

    Thanks for sharing

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    muy buen articulo

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  • Eli Salgado

    Hi Bethany,

    Thanks for sharing this. I´m absolutely convinced of the convenience of testing a different ad copy. I also got similar findings to your case study. For my campaign I created an ad version with an expiration date in the description which showed higher CTR and conversions. But the results stantout when an additional info was added: the brand name in the headline.

  • http://twitter.com/ChristopherM ChristopherM

    Thank you for this post, incredibly useful!

  • http://searchandsocialmedia.co.uk Eldad Sotnick-Yogev

    great post to help anyone start thinking not only how to test but what to test. I like your simple formula and hope our teams get the time to keep testing with this sort of format